It was thought that there was too much dialogue in our film opening and especially that it was a little too blunt. Also it seem our title seemed too obvious, Eternitie (La Vie d'un Vampire) thought gave it away and made it too obvious that our story was about a vampire.
We were advised to have the voice over as the main speech within the film and less emphasis on other dialogue, but making sure there was plenty of narrative enigma in our film to ensure the audience was not quite sure whether or not he was a vampire.
Also we were advised not to swear in our film as there did not seem to be much need to use bad language in our film plus it was likely to restrict our audience and where we could screen our film.
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